Evaluation: Question Four (Draft)

Evaluation 4 by AliceLillyHoar

Evaluation: Question Three (Draft)

Evaluation 3 Copy

Evaluation: Question One (Draft)

Question 1

First Draft Music Video Teacher Feedback

• "Shot quality is very good, the girl is very effective and the mise-en-scene for the most part is effective."
• "The lip syncing looks a bit forced in places as if she isn't singing the song - this can be a bit distracting."
• "From 48 seconds on the video works best - when you get to the hook/chorus and increase the amount of shots you utilise"

First Draft Video Peer Feedback

• 'Very good use of mise-en-scene in first scene, authentic to '50's', 'Diner/Monroe era', good use of colours throughout, as well as connotations e.g., red - love/lust'
• 'Authentic setting as well as realistic lip-syncing, beauty spot is a nice touch, good use of cuts. Only negative feedback is the shadow on the white back ground and when she looks into the camera near the beginning and sings, this doesn't look as good, I think the facial expression needs to be straighter.
• 'Very good picture quality, good mise-en-scene, maybe look at lip-syncing, the person is very static'
• 'Really good lip-syncing, good locations and mise-en-scene, the artist looks believable. Really good camera quality, good start.'
• 'Good locations and lighting. The theme works really well and the mise-en-scene matches the theme well. Really good.'

Music Video Draft

Draft Digipak and Advert Teacher Feedback

Digipak

• Really promising, my digipak has a striking look which flows through into each of the panels. The images also look really good and the final digipak will have great images providing I can re-create these.
• I should re-consider the placement, layout or amount of lyrics within the digipak as it's appearance is too cluttered.
• I should re-consider the positioning of the telephone of the disc panel, as this image may look better in the centre.

High Level 3, 6/10

Advert

• The image looks good but does appear too busy, although it ties in with the digipak.
• More evidence of research for my advert is needed.
• The left hand side needs improving as the font size is too large and the text overall doesn't fit well with the advert as a whole.
• Consider star rating.
• Record company logos and website text needs to be larger as it isn't clear enough.

Low Level 3, 6/10

First Draft Advertisement

First Draft Digipak

This is my final first draft copy of my digipak: