First Draft Video Peer Feedback

• 'Very good use of mise-en-scene in first scene, authentic to '50's', 'Diner/Monroe era', good use of colours throughout, as well as connotations e.g., red - love/lust'
• 'Authentic setting as well as realistic lip-syncing, beauty spot is a nice touch, good use of cuts. Only negative feedback is the shadow on the white back ground and when she looks into the camera near the beginning and sings, this doesn't look as good, I think the facial expression needs to be straighter.
• 'Very good picture quality, good mise-en-scene, maybe look at lip-syncing, the person is very static'
• 'Really good lip-syncing, good locations and mise-en-scene, the artist looks believable. Really good camera quality, good start.'
• 'Good locations and lighting. The theme works really well and the mise-en-scene matches the theme well. Really good.'